Amid
the darkening forest and ominous cloud formations, Arabella Burton slowly
meandered along the gravel pathway to her isolated abode on the outskirts of
Yorkenshire. The chilling autumn breeze
whispered through trees as Arabella felt the first raindrop fall. They
staggered themselves in a slow progression at first, but fell faster and faster
with each passing second. A loud clap of thunder followed the first bright
flash of lightning. Arabella smiled at the
sky as she tightly wrapped a large hooded cloak around her thin frame. She
loved Mother Nature’s fierce strength and tempermental attitude. The tumultuous weather invoked such an
invigorating sense of life into everything.
“Yah, yah!”
Arabella’s thoughts were interrupted by a faint call.
“Yah!” it called
again.
Squinting her
eyes, Arabella processed the vague outline of a man riding horseback. The
figure rapidly approached to reveal a strong, black stallion with a full-suited
rider. It was clear that he was a
kingdom official. Must have been some kind of soldier.
“Ay, out of the
way, miss!” her called out to her.
She ducked to
the side of the pathway to let him pass.
*
Giving her a brief nod of
acknowledgement, the man was gone as quickly as he had come. Arabella turned to watch him gallop away, but
just as she did so, noticed a quick, blurred movement within the darkened wood.
The girl started ahead again, quickening her pace. It was common knowledge that the forest
became dangerous at night. Her focus was
interrupted by a strangled cry from behind.
The solider.
Arabella whirled
around to see both the rider and his horse collapsed in a heap on the ground.
Wide-eyed, she slowly started toward the accident, dagger in hand beneath her
cloak.
“Ay!” she cried
out. “Are you alright?” The wounded man groaned in pain, squirming
beneath the weight of his fallen stallion.
“Are you
alright?” she repeated, this time louder than before.
“Help me. Oh God, help,” she heard him wheeze, barely
conscious.
Further
approaching the injured rider, Arabella noted the arrow in his chest.
“Who did this to
you?” she gasped, frantically searching the trees for any kind of answer.
The man,
however, could not iterate anything now.
It was bleak. He would surely
lose his life.
Sudden commotion
in the forest seized her attention and she froze, watching a throng of woodsmen
surround her with weapons of every sort.
As they sprung toward her, the terrified girl let out a bloodcurdling
screech. Shielding herself with her
cloak, she waited for the sharp stab of the knife or splitting crack of the
axe. But nothing came. Instead they besieged the already unconscious
man. Blood spurted everywhere as they
tore his remains to pieces.
“It must be so,”
came the repetitive murmur amongst the men.
In a horrified
state of shock, Arabella found herself numbly sprinting as fast as she could
down the winding path. Had they noticed
her absence? Who were they? What did they want? Would they slaughter her with
their bladed weapons, too? Arabella risked a nanosecond glance behind her, but
immediately halted at what she saw.
*
No one. There was nothing. No trace of blood, no horse, no dismembered
man, no evil woodsmen. Breathless, Arabella remained completely frozen for a
moment. She cautiously approached the scene of the crime, her senses heightened
and pulse quickening with each second.
But she was alone. Arabella sighed shakily and resumed her journey. This
wouldn’t be the first time she experienced something like this. Arabella had always been told she had an
active imagination, but this was something eerily abnormal. “You have a gift,”
her mother would say. But even she did
not know of these catastrophic visions.
“How was your
walk?” inquired her mother when Arabella returned to their old, dilapidated
cottage.
“Quite well,”
she lied, smiling brightly while internally hyperventilating.
The only
inhabitants of the small, isolated house were Arabella and her mother. Surely
she could not inform her poor caretaker of these morbid visions. It would only disturb her. Besides, what if these brief episodes held
more than just an active imagination? They had no one to protect them, even if
it was just from a state of paranoia. It
was times like these where Arabella wished there were a male figure around. She
had no siblings and had never known her father. “Do not ever speak of him,” her
mother strictly admonished her from a young age.
“I’m glad you
had a pleasant time,” her mother’s voice interrupted her thoughts. “So you
wouldn’t mind walking the trail again tomorrow?”
“Not at all,”
she lied again. “Why do you ask?”
“I need to buy
some essentials at the village market tomorrow.
But, my leg…” she trailed off, sadly looking down at her injured calf. For as long as Arabella could remember, her
mother suffered from a bad leg. She
claimed to have been cutting firewood for the cold winter when the saw cut into
her calf. Weak and infrequent medication allowed for severe infection to plant
itself within the wound.
“Do not fret,
Mother. I will go,” said Arabella,
sympathy lacing her voice.
*
The sun was high
in the sky as the girl made her way to the village square of Yorkenshire. The
plants alongside the pathway were still moist from last night’s storm, but
yielded beautiful, vibrant colors. The
vast expanse of blue above her was set aglow by the sun and a light breeze made
its way through the trees. It was
perfect. As Arabella approached the
village square, she noticed a swarm of villagers bustling about in a frenzy.
“…stabbed several
times…”
“...only two and
twenty years of age…”
“…group of woodsmen…”
“….bless his
soul…”
Arabella heard
bits and pieces, but remained unsure of what the fuss was about. The flustered group stood in front of a
scroll posted on a stone wall. Soldier
Found Dead on Wickthorn Trail, read the headline. A rough sketch of the
victim was drawn below. Arabella gasped.
It was the same man she had seen last night.
“Where on
Wickthorn Trail did they find this man?” she asked, raising her voice above the
crowd.
“It was just
after the sharp bend about half a mile down,” came a reply.
“When did it
happen?” she pressed.
“At dawn this
morning. Someone heard a cry for help at five.
But by the time anyone arrived, it was too late.”
Arabella’s mind
raced a mile a minute as she removed herself from the tangled crowd. She tried to process what she had just
discovered, but was distracted by the sound of clopping hooves. A procession of
kingdom officials, clergymen, and royalty all slowly made their way through the
village square. The mass of commoners
respectfully watched from the side of the road.
Arabella did the same. Several soldiers marched in front of the royal
carriage, which held the king and queen, while other regal figures followed by
horseback.
*
Without warning,
the last rider began to slump, thrusting himself into the horse’s mane before
limply falling to the ground. The
procession carried on as if nothing had gone amiss. Arabella stood, baffled.
“Does nobody see
that man on the ground?” she asked the woman next to her.
“Wha--?” the
woman only stared at her in confusion.
“The body! On
the ground! Do you not see it?” Arabella cried.
The fellow
commoners only looked at her with bewilderment.
The fallen man
began to convulse on the ground, blood pouring forth from his mouth. Not one person reacted so Arabella rushed
toward him. Upon further inspection, she
realized he’d been stabbed in the heart.
“Oh my God, he’s
been stabbed! Stabbed!” she cried, hoping for someone, anyone, to come and help.
“Someone help
him!” she implored. Still, no one
moved. Removing her scarf, Arabella did
her best to wrap it tightly around his wound.
Her cold, shaking hands were covered with blood and she could see his
eyes becoming lifeless.
“I’m so sorry,”
she whispered to him, tears beginning to form.
“No one else is seeing this.”
*
“Watch out,
miss!” it was a distant cry.
“Miss! Out of
the way!” louder, but still distant.
“Ay! WATCH OUT!”
Arabella felt
herself being shoved to the ground. She was greeted by darkness and a sharp
pain in her right hip. When she opened
her eyes, she saw several villagers hunched over her.
“…must be a bit
slow in the head…” said one.
“…looked
petrified, the poor thing…” said another.
“…could have
been hit by that wagon!...”
The image of the
dead man came immediately rushing back to Arabella’s head. She sat up fast to observe her
surroundings. What she saw was
surprising, but not unexpected. She sat
in the same place as before, but there was no regal figure. No blood.
No death. Nothing.
“Was there a
royal procession?” she inquired of the nearby villagers.
“Yes, they came
by not five minutes ago,” said a middle-aged man. “You should know. You were right here the entire time.”
“Nobody fell?”
she asked.
They exchanged
concerned glances before responding. “The
only one who fell was you. Be more careful next time. You could have been hit
by that wagon!” Arabella furrowed her
brow before looking down at her hands.
Aside from bits of debris from the dirt roadway, there was nothing. Not a trace of blood. Realization struck her
once more and she quickly made her decision.
“Thank you. I
must go,” she gathered her scattered belongings before rushing toward the
palace.
Murmurs of
confusion could be heard, but Arabella had no time to explain. She had to save
his life.
***
Robust stone
walls marked the borders of the palace and, as Arabella breathlessly approached
the Iron Gate, she was filled with great apprehension. Two large guards were stationed directly
outside.
“Hello,” she
greeted them. “I have come with an
urgent message to the royal family.”
“Who sent you,
eh?” the first guard interrogated.
“Myself,” she
answered truthfully. Both men scoffed
before the first guard shook his head.
“Go home, miss. You aren’t passing these walls.”
“I believe I may
have a very important message to share!” she tried again, but was faced with
the same response as before. Their
condescending tone infuriated her.
“Do you know the
solider who died on Wickthorn Trail last night?” came her third attempt.
Both guards
immediately looked at her with a renewed interest. The second guard nodded in
affirmation.
“I saw him die
before it happened.”
“What?”
Before she could
continue, Arabella was interrupted by a clergyman requesting access to the
palace.
“Are you close
with the royal family?” she immediately inquired.
“Do not pay any
mind to her,” the first guard said.
“No, please!”
Arabella insisted. “Let me explain myself.
I heard a strangled cry in the forest last night. I witnessed the death
of the soldier before its actual happening.
I could have saved him!”
The second guard
cut her off. “Look, witch, the royal family doesn’t care about the death of one
soldier. Leave.”
“That’s not why
I’m here!” she persisted. “I saw
another. Vision, that is. This time it
was one of noble blood! He rode in the very back of the royal procession…”
“OUT!” She was
rudely interrupted by the first guard.
“Get out before someone hears this and demands your head. Go. GO! And
don’t try coming back.”
Arabella met
eyes with the clergyman, who gave her nothing but a sympathetic glance before
entering into the palace grounds.
Arabella indignantly fled back to her cottage.
*
Heir to Throne Murdered in Village Square,
read the headline of another scroll posted the next day.
Arabella felt
the anger inside of her grow larger. She
had returned to the village to buy her mother’s list of essentials she had
forgotten about the day before. Upon
arriving, she noticed a swarm of villagers crowding around a new scroll. Before
even seeing it, Arabella knew what to expect.
She was right.
*
“Arabella, come
quickly!” her mother called from the room. The afternoon had passed
uneventfully, but Arabella still felt rage from the day before. A low murmur of
a voice indicated that her mother was not alone.
“Yes, what is
it?” she asked, before halting to a stop. A clergyman stood on their doorstep,
eyeing her with intrigue. But not just any clergyman. It was the same she had seen yesterday.
“May we talk,
Miss Arabella Burton?”
Arabella was
bewildered, but responded positively.
“Yes.”
Sitting the
gentleman down in their musty living space, Arabella’s mother left to make
tea.
“You must know
my motive in speaking with you,” began the man who introduced himself as Sir
Clifton.
“I have a
guess,” she replied.
“The visions of
the dead. How do you know?” he inquired
curiously, his voice low.
Arabella
hesitantly met his gaze.
“I won’t accuse
you of sorcery,” he promised.
“They come in
brief episodes,” she said quietly.
“How often?”
“It used to
happen only once or twice a year. But,
as of late,” she paused to look at him, “they come almost every day.”
Sir Clifton
shook his head sadly.
“How accurate
are your predictions?”
“Almost
infallible. Not one has proven faulty.”
“Hmm,” came the
reply. Sir Clifton stroked his beard thoughtfully. “I must take you to the
king.”
Arabella shook
her head in vehement opposition. “Surely he will accuse me of witchcraft.”
“Not if he wants
to protect his kingdom,” he muttered under his breath.
Arabella’s
mother was left with no choice but to wish her daughter farewell.
“She shall
return quite soon,” Sir Clifton promised the fretful woman.
*
Arabella had
never ventured beyond the palace walls, but it was beautiful. The gargantuan
stone structure, though old, was majestic and enchanting. Upon successfully
entering through the gateway, the drawbridge was let down for both Sir Clifton
and Arabella to pass.
“Wait here,” the
clergyman ordered. He had led her
through a maze of steep stairwells and arched stone hallways, eventually
stopping just outside a large room. As
he entered, Arabella could hear hushed whispering and a definitive reply.
“Bring her in.”
Sir Clifton
motioned to her with his finger.
Arabella walked into the large and open space. She stood upon smooth tile floors. To the
left and right were large bays of stained glass windows. As she looked ahead,
she saw stairs ascending to three thrones, the largest one being in the
middle. In his plush chair sat King
Gregor himself.
“It has been my
utmost desire to meet you, Arabella,” the king spoke kind words to the nervous
girl.
“The pleasure is
all mine, your majesty,” Arabella curtsied in front of the lauded king.
“You must sit
down,” his eyes smiled warmly, but his tone was not as inviting.
Arabella slowly
took her seat upon one of the stairs, looking expectantly at the king.
He paused before
speaking. “I have heard of what you can
do. Clifton, my most faithful assistant
and treasured clergyman, has told me of your powers.”
Powers? Arabella
attempted to politely correct him.
“Perhaps not powers, my king.
After all, they are merely visions. Most would think it to be some kind
of witchcraft.”
“In times like
these, that may be just what this kingdom needs,” King Gregor spoke
gravely.
“Pardon my
asking, but what do you mean, sir?” Arabella was curious.
“So you do not
know..,” he trailed off, gaze flickering to a bay of stained glass
windows.
“Wedgemore,” he
began distantly, “has declared war upon our kingdom.”
“Wedgemore has
declared war upon Yorkenshire? But why?”
The king studied
her before speaking. “Let the reasons regarding why remain unspoken for now.
What matters is that you listen very closely to my words. Warriors, villagers,
farmers, noblemen—everyone—from Wedgemore will soon encroach upon Yorkenshire.
They will wage battle upon our kingdom.
But Yorkenshire cannot afford to lose any citizens. We have people
willing to fight, but no one has an advantage like you do. You shall be the protector of our people.”
Arabella was too
shocked to speak.
“Pardon me, my
liege, but I must ask you to speak again.”
“You, Arabella
Burton, are to be the protector of Yorkenshire,” King Gregor clearly stated
once more. “If you experience any sort of vision, you are to inform me
immediately.”
Arabella nodded
obediently, not knowing what else to do.
“So it has been
settled,” spoke the king. “You shall
stay here at the palace then, as an honorary guest.”
“You are too
kind, generous king. But my mother—“
“Your mother can
wait,” he interjected, fear becoming prevalent in his next words. “This kingdom
cannot.”
***
Arabella was led
to her temporary bedchambers and left to ponder about what she had just agreed
to. What have you done? If you make one
false move, the entire kingdom will have your head. Morbid images of her
severed head and a jeering crowd made her shudder. Sleep. That is what she needed.
Arabella closed
her eyes to escape her changing reality.
*
“Landon. Landon,
help me, dammit!” a gruff, authoritative voice rasped. The night was quite dark, but the moonlight
shone bright enough to outline several men standing over some kind of corpse in
the village square.
The boy, Landon,
shook with fear but obeyed the demanding figure.
“What shall I do
with it?” he quivered, shakily grabbing hold of a cold, limp hand.
“Dispose of it,
twit. And quickly. We don’t have much time,” ordered the man.
“Your majesty,
perhaps it would be best—“ a voice began.
“Silence,” came
Gregor’s voice again.
Landon began
weeping over the dead body. “I cannot,” he cried. “I cannot dispose of this body. He was—still is-- family.”
“You will do as I say, boy!” Gregor lurched
toward Landon.
“He was your
brother!” the boy shouted hysterically.
“Hush! You’ll
draw attention,” hissed Carlton, an advisor to the king.
“A brother who
was getting in my way!” Gregor shot back.
“That’s no
excuse to kill him!” Landon stood his ground.
“Harold was only
concerned with expanding his kingdom,” Gregor spat.
“So are you,”
retorted the boy.
“We mustn’t
argue now, you’re only wasting time,” came the warning of Darius, another
advisor.
“Harold intended
to merge Wedgemore and Yorkenshire!” Gregor continued, ignoring Darius.
“You only hated
him because he was a better man than you!” Landon pressed emphatically.
“Don’t make me
use my dagger again,” threatened Gregor.
“You are a
despicable man and I am ashamed to call you my uncle,” Landon glared darkly at
Gregor, tears staining his dirty face.
“I killed him, I
can kill you too,” threatened Gregor.
Landon instantly
retreated, but gathered his courage. “See
if I care,” his face became indifferent.
“It’s clearly how you solve all your problems.”
In a fit of
fury, Gregor lunged at his only nephew and stabbed him repeatedly in the
heart. After the deed was done, he
turned to his mortified followers. “Let’s
go,” he ordered. “Before someone hears.”
*
Arabella woke up
with a start. The heir to the throne. Murdered. In the village square. Murdered
by Gregor? If she hadn’t regretted taking on this job last night, she certainly
did now. Although, given her insight to
Gregor’s impulsive nature, perhaps it was best she had agreed.
***
“I trust your
night was satisfactory,” King Gregor spoke to her the next morning at breakfast.
“Yes, quite,”
Arabella said. “Though I had a rather
interesting dream.”
The king looked
at her with interest. “What kind of dream?” he asked.
“It pertained to
the late King Harold of Wedgemore,” she spoke, her gaze intent on her plate
rather than Gregor.
“And?”
“I just
wondered,” she slowly began, “why the Wedgemore village assumed the kingdom of
Yorkenshire was responsible?”
The king scoffed
good-naturedly, subtle relief flooding his face.
“My brother and
I,” Gregor started. “We never were very close. We may have been related, but we
held almost nothing in common. Our
animosity had been long known within the castle walls and we all know that
words have a way of spreading. Naturally,
when the death of dear Harold came upon him, most assumed that we were
responsible in some way.” He shook his
head sadly.
“If you don’t
mind me asking,” Arabella paused before continuing. “How exactly did Harold
die?”
Gregor looked up
gravely.
“He was ambushed
by a tribe of gypsies while journeying to Mardenville.”
Liar.
Arabella was
about to offer her condolences when a group of members from the kings court sat
themselves at the table.
“I have called
you all together to strategize,” announced the king. “Our kingdom needs protection.”
Arabella looked
around at the table. Of the group of men, she recognized two of them. Carlton
and Darius sat directly across from her while kitchen maids began serving breakfast.
*
Upon receiving a
platter of food, each member of the court began eating. Without warning, the candle-lit chandelier
crashed upon the long table, glass bits shattering everywhere. In her brief
glance to the king, she could see he was eating his breakfast as if nothing had
happened. That was all the confirmation she
needed. Fighting against every instinct
to scream or run or help, Arabella remained seated, expressionless. After all,
this was just a vision.
“AHH!” screeched
Carlton, his face contorting in pain as the sharp end of the chandelier pushed
itself further into his flesh.
“Dear God, help!”
came Darius’ cry. Shards of glass covered his entire body and blood oozed from
every cut.
Fire set ablaze
on the wooden table, consuming the rest of the bodies.
*
Arabella let out
an involuntary cry.
King Gregor
looked up in surprise. “What, what is it?”
Arabella looked
at him. She opened her mouth as if to
say something, but looked down instead, feign coughing.
“Excuse me,” was
all she said before retreating to her bedchambers.
Arabella sat,
pondering whether or not to tell the king of all the imminent deaths. Would he
be the cause of their shortened lives anyways?
“Arabella, come
quick!” came rapid knocking on her door.
“What? What’s
going on?” she answered the frantic knocking.
“Outside!
Warriors from Wedgemore! You must predict what will happen!” the maidservant
ushered her to a high balcony. From below,
Arabella could see a mass of warriors, weapons in hand all rioting just outside
the Iron Gates. On the other side were suited soliders, prepared for
battle. Cries could be heard from the
outside of the gate. The guards. Soon enough, the throng of passionate
warriors made their way inside the palace gates and havoc arose.
“Do you see what’s
happening?” Arabella asked the maidservant.
“Yes,” she
nodded in fear.
Within minutes,
the soldiers of Yorkenshire lay slaughtered by the drawbridge. The people of
Wedgemore would stop at nothing. Did
they know what really happened to King Harold? Panic was rising in the palace
as King Gregor called together his most treasured advisors.
“Do exactly as I
say. Do not allow the Wedgemorian warriors into our palace!”
Carlton and
Darius nodded seriously, a layer of doubt flooding their faces.
“Come, your
majesty, we must keep you safe!” and King Gregor was guided to the secret
hideaway room designed for instances like these.
Though Carlton
and Darius did their best to ensure no one got into the castle, their attempts
were made in vain. The number of soldiers
had dwindled significantly and there was almost no one to protect the
Yorkenshire palace. Slaughtered bodies
lay everywhere. Arabella left her spot
on the balcony quite some time ago to help with anything she could. However, she was forced into another hideaway
room with the other noblemen as her visions were labeled as valuable.
*
Morning came only to remind
everyone of the tragic causalities the day before. The bodies of Carlton and Darius could be
found on the front palace steps. King
Gregor was particularly cautious in venturing outdoors, but as he did so, he
saw his two esteemed noblemen. Carlton
lay completely lifeless, several arrows punctured into him. On his other side lie Darius.
At this time, Arabella took it upon
herself to investigate the destruction from the night before. As she stepped outside the palace, she saw
the bodies of Carlton and Darius. Gregor
shook his head before speaking.
“You didn’t envision this?” he
asked her.
Arabella didn’t know what to say.
Either way she would be in trouble.
“I did, my lord.”
The king looked at her with an
indescribable mixture of shock and anger.
“You saw this happen?” he asked
again, his hands gesturing to the bodies.
Arabella said nothing. She didn’t know what to say.
“You didn’t tell me?! That was our
goddamn agreement! Yorkenshire has been destroyed and you let it happen!
Guards!”
Arabella froze, trying to process
what had just happened. Immediately two
guards emerged from the castle doors.
“Take her to the dungeon,” King
Gregor demanded. “She shall be executed by
dawn.”
“Yes, your majesty,” came the
reply.
“No wait, I can explain!” came
Arabella’s urgent request.
King Gregor looked at her with
utter hatred. “You have two minutes.”
*
Right as she was
about to speak, she felt the ground rumble beneath her feet. She stole an
alarmed glance at the king, who was waiting expectantly. Suddenly, fear crept into his eyes. “The kingdom, it’s crumbling!” he cried. The
castle shook as stones from above began to fall. One by one, they struck the ground around
them until a large stone fell on top of King Gregor himself. Arabella looked up only to see more fallen
rocks rapidly tumbling downward. She could see a large one plummeting from
directly above. It crushed her to the
ground.
*
Arabella found
herself on the ground with blood on her cheek.
“I said you had
two minutes,” thundered King Gregor. “Speak
or the guards strike again!”
The exhausted
girl weakly held his gaze. “You are to
be killed,” she rasped.
He regarded her
with cold disdain. “This is coming from the witch who falsely predicted the
fate of our kingdom. Take her away, guards.”
“You don’t
understand!” she cried out. “You are not safe here!”
“Nobody is safe
here, thanks to you,” he spat.
Arabella was
thrown into a dank and dirty dungeon and told to stay put. Where else would she go? She sat in the darkest corner, regretting
everything she’d ever said about this so called gift. Tears began free falling as she realized
these were the last hours she would be alive.
Noisy commotion from above distracted Arabella from her tearful
reflections.
“Ayy!” came a
distant call. “Help, somebody help!”
“…he’s been
stoned….”
“The king has
been stoned!” came a bloodcurdling shriek, echoing down the steep, spiraling staircase
so that Arabella could hear it clearly.
She hugged her knees
and allowed a hopeful thought to plant itself in her head. Maybe she would not be killed at dawn because
the king was no longer here to demand it.
Perhaps they would let her go back.
Back to her mother, back to her home, back to her old life.
Arabella heard
rapid footsteps descending the staircase and turned to see the queen.
Beyond startled,
Arabella just looked at her.
“My dear
husband,” began the queen regally, “trusted you to protect us. To protect Yorkenshire. He told me of your agreement and of your
infallible visions.” Her voice cracked and tears began falling down her cheeks.
“Instead of making our kingdom stronger, you have destroyed everything. Restoring a palace is one thing, but a
person? You can’t bring them back.” She chocked on these last words and
tearfully stumbled away.
Overwhelmed and exhausted,
Arabella closed her eyes and allowed herself to be consumed by darkness.
She awoke to
someone prodding at her back.
“Get up. You are
to be interrogated.”
She was led to a
building just beyond the palace gates, where throngs of villagers were congregated. They all eyed her suspiciously so she looked
at the ground. Once inside the
courtroom, she was spoken to by a man named Lord Wykeham.
“Arabella Burton,
you are to be tried for the murder of Kinger Gregor the Great and the demise of
Yorkenshire.”
She said
nothing.
“At this time,
you may explain yourself.”
Her mind was a
whirlwind of chaos, but Arabella spoke composedly.
“I have always
seen these visions, these morbid bits of the future,” she began. “They haunt me
all the time. With each passing day, my distress only worsens. To be
responsible for so many lives is overwhelming, my lord. I understand this is a
time of trial and that our country depends on what keeps our people safe, but
one simply cannot be held accountable for the welfare of an entire kingdom! I
speak to you honestly, I was not the cause of death to our noble king.”
Chaos broke loose in the large
courtroom as Arabella took her seat, defeated. Villagers sprung at her
aggressively in attempts to remedy their unsatisfied anger. Clergymen, who had once been friendly,
regarded her now with nothing more than cold disdain. The group of elders, comprised of old
prestigious officials, sat before her skeptically, whispering amongst
themselves before hushing the angry villagers and continuing their
interrogation.
“Arabella Burton, previous to the
death of King Gregor the Great, had you ever wrongly predicted the death of a
fellow Yorkenshire?” Lord Wykeham addressed the exhausted girl.
A look of bleak exhaustion flashed
across Arabella’s face before she replied. “There was no wrong prediction! He
didn’t listen to me!”
“Lies!” someone cried.
“I speak the truth!” she angrily
spat.
Merciless chatter
could be heard from the people who had once loved her. Tension rose within the
courtroom once more as the elders discussed her fate. From the expressions they
wore, it appeared as if they were discussing something trivial. Simultaneous
nods of approval showed the collective agreement. Slowly turning to face her,
they asked their final question.
“Any last words you desire to
speak?”
Fear and utter despair laced
themselves in her next words. “Only that the absolute truth is this; I did not
kill King Gregor,” she weakly tried one last time.
The courtroom burst into another
frenzy.
“Lies! Lies!” spat an old hag
standing in front.
“Execute her!” came another shout.
“SILENCE!” the group of elders
demanded.
The whole room became noiseless
before Lord Wykeham spoke the anticipated, but dreaded words.
“You, Arabella Burton, have been
charged guilty of the murder of King Gregor the Great. Thereby, you shall be
executed for treason…” The lord continued with the conclusion, but Arabella
couldn’t listen. She was suddenly struck
with unimaginable pain. Looking down at
her stomach, she saw the end of a blade protruding from her front. She had been stabbed in the back. She
frantically searched the room for any kind of reaction, but realized that there
was none. That’s when she knew.
Geez! That was awesome Linnea! Okay, now time for my thoughts on it: Okay, it really depends on wheather you want the scene to be suspencful, or the more running away to find nothing is chasing you. But, in the beginning when Arabella is running away from the woodsmen and she turns around to find nothing is chasing her I think she should hear voices shouting and as she is running maybe have a couple arrows whizz past her. So, later when the villigers are talking of the murderer maybe have a few say:
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"...bootprints on the road..."
"...suspected to be chasing..."
,stuff like that of course with better wording. Other than that I think only one more part could change...and it is just a tiny change.
When she is eating breakfast with the king I think she should gasp and then say "e-e-excuse me!" with a hint of urgency but not enough where the king expects much. I will tell you more over the phone today.
see you later!